_Jroldin is really starting to grow on me... sure Flek is awesome warrior and Zarien isn't that bad and Astrid has these interesting moral problems and what not and I like all my characters, but, you know... When Jroldin is just able to tick off his assailants to the nth degree, ya know... There are just things like that that make you just want to laugh out loud at and with Jroldin. I suppose this part could be summed up with a couple words: Jroldin is awesome.

Part XXVIII: Separate Too Long

Date: Amanela 18th, 114 A.U.


Oldin hung up his coat as he shut the front door, walking into the kitchen. For the first time in ages, he was home on time and would be able to talk with Jroldin. The next day was to be his Naming Day. Oldin rubbed his head. He had taken out a lot of his busy work schedule, what with Astrid trying to get deeper in her spy network and more investigations and all, but he had gotten everything set up at the Cathedral and had gotten all of the nearby relatives and such. For some odd reason, the priests there had recognized Jroldin and said that he’d been coming quite often to the Great Cathedral as of late and had been talking with some of the priests. Oldin didn’t quite know what to think of that.
Jroldin had been acting strange as of late, what with the circlet he thought was on his head and all. It was probably long due for the two of them to talk, both of recent events, and of what Jroldin wanted to do in the future. Oldin felt guilty; he hadn’t talked with Jroldin at all about what Jroldin wanted to do after Naming Day. At the very least, he had been able to pull some strings to have the whole day of tomorrow off.

“I’m home!” Oldin called out, while opening a cupboard to where he had stashed away some food to have dinner with Jroldin. He had actually managed to go to the store and grab some stuff earlier. Oldin overturned the pot to where he had hidden it, but was met with nothing. Jroldin had found it first. Oldin sighed, and laughed a bit, before turning around.

“Jroldin?” He was met with the silence of the house. Oldin frowned and cocked his head. He would have thought that Jroldin would have been here by now. A beep emitted from the answering machine and Oldin walked over. Oldin pressed the button on the answering machine to listen.

“Greetings Jroldin, this is Governor Astrid,” the voice began. Oldin looked at it in shock. Governor Astrid wanted to speak with Jroldin? “A new expert came in who wanted you to see the new star; he said that because the prophesy spoke of it, he thought that you should see it. We also brought in the elf, and thought it would be best to see it together. Brother Tomas will be over to pick you up around midnight. I apologize for the late time, but to see the star, it will take a while to get through security and stuff to get outside. If there are any problems with this, please call me or Brother Tomas. Thank you.” And with that, it ended.

Oldin leaned against the wall, trying to comprehend what had happened. Not only did Jroldin seem to have met with Governor Astrid and some priest, that he seemed to know, but they were also arranging him to go outside the mountain to see some star. And a prophesy! What the heck did Jroldin have to do with a prophesy? Jroldin hated those things… And to go outside the mountain… Oldin had never done that, and he didn’t want to think about all the strings that the Governor would have to pull to get Jroldin out there. And Governor Astrid was doing all this for Jroldin? Oldin put his hand on the phone. He had been apart from his son too long. It was time to call Governor Astrid.



“Ah, Master Jroldin…” the man said. “Please, sit down in front of me…”

Jroldin looked at the man sitting behind the desk and then, slowly sat down in the chair. “What do you want?”

“I am the one asking the questions here,” the man said sharply. “And you’re the one who’ll be doing the answering.” A beeper in front of him buzzed, and he quickly looked down. “Ah good,” he said. “It appears that Astrid has checked her mail box… but never mind that for now.” He looked back up at Jroldin. “What do you know of the prophecy that you seem to be a part of?”

“You seem to know a lot about me,” Jroldin said. “You trying to write an article for some celebrity magazine?”

The man’s eyes narrowed. “This is no time for jokes!” he snapped. “My business is of no concern to you.”

“I’m hungry,” Jroldin said. “Could we perhaps stop this interrogation for a bit so that I can eat? I always think better on a full stomach.”

“No,” the man snapped. “What do you know of the prophecy?”

“Well, the Governor recites it every year, so you should know the prophecy,” Jroldin said. “And you already know that I am a part of it. What are you, a stalker or something?”

The man leapt up, banging his fist against the table. “You are being an impeccable idiot!” he snapped, seething, and then calmed down a bit to go back to his still voice. “You will answer my questions or there will be consequences,” he said firmly. “So how about I get a bit more specific. Are you going to go along with Astrid and the prophesy?”

“Why shouldn’t I,” Jroldin said. “If I do, that means I get to be part of a team beating bad guys. You are a bad guy, right? I thought it might be fun to get to beat you up with a big group of friends and all, and-”

The man drew up a gun from beneath his deck, and slowly placed it on the table. Jroldin stopped midsentance. The man acted like nothing had changed. “What do you know about your dad and his case?”

“What’s the gun for?” Jroldin asked. “You trying to threaten me by its presence.”

The man glared at him. “Why-”

“Yeah, my dad trained me to be too smart for you,” Jroldin said. “He knew that sometime I would be kidnapped to use against him... You do know he has a tracker on me, don’t you?”

The man looked surprised. “What?”

“Aw, crumbs,” Jroldin said, snapping his fingers. “I forgot to mention it when your goons kidnapped me. Yeah, he has a tracer on me so he can always find me if I was kidnapped. He’s probably coming to get me with all his big guns and stuff.”

“Stupid tracer,” the man said and swore, pressing a buzzer.

“Trying to get it off me?” Jroldin asked. “My dad will still be able to find my last location and find your all-too secret hideout. Kind of fun, huh? Anyways, if you want my tracer, it’s right behind my ear. Figured might as well save you the trouble of looking so this gets over soon.” Two men came in the room.

“The kid has a tracer on him,” the man behind the desk said. “He says its behind his ear. That probably isn’t the only one. Strip him and search for any other tracers, then put him and the priest in a car. We have to leave the hideout. I have other business to take care of. Now move on it!”

“Yes, sir.”

Question of the Week:What would you do if you were Jroldin? (Whoever gives the best answer gets 5 extra comment points.) Key is to give a funny answer that matches Jroldin's personality.)
 
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Part XXVII: Exterior Conflict, Interior Conflict

Amanela 11th, 114 A.U.


Number 994 slowly tried to regain conscience slowly. There was a terrific pain in the back of his head, and for a bit, Number 994 couldn’t remember what had happened. And then he felt the burn down the center of his palm and remembered all—leaping after the elf in the escape pod, being shot through the arm, getting his gloves taken away, and then shoved backwards to hit his head against the floor. Must’ve knocked him out.

“ATTENTION!” a loudspeaker blared from outside. “THE ELF REBEL AND THE ORC 994 ARE COMMANDED TO CEASE AND DESIST THIS REBELLION!” What? I’m not helping the elf!

Rule 3: Never, ever give up, no matter what the odds

Quickly standing up, trying to ignore the pain in his hand, Number 994 leapt forward at the elf. So what the elf would crush him in physical combat. Maybe he could dislodge him enough so that the chasing defense force would get him. At least, Number 994 assumed they were chasing him—he couldn’t think about what else was shooting at them. Falling through the air, Number 994 grabbed the elf’s neck with both hands and squeezed.

The elf jerked back and grabbed his gun as he fell back, trying to twist around. “Get off of me, you idiot!” he yelled. Number 994 knew he couldn’t win it with the elf having the gun, so as the elf fell, he leapt forward, moving his legs apart to jump over the elf, and reached out for his gloves so that he could conduct electricity to nullify the elf. Unfortunately, the elf was too quick.

Number 994 felt the elf grab the end of the shirt and pull back. Not strong enough to resist, Number 994 halted in his motion and fell back, landing hard on top of the elf. With a quick move, the elf kicked the orc off of him, scooting back and pointing the gun at the elf, aiming at his head. And then an explosion racked the pod.

Number 994 flew against the side as the escape pod spun, while the elf’s hand snaked backwards to grab the wheel. He seemed to be trying to steer but to no avail—the shot had broken the controls. Number 994 smiled coldly as he stood up.
“THE ORC AND ELF HAVE NOT STOPPED. THEREFORE, THEIR LIVES ARE FORFEIT AS TRAITORS TO THE MOTHERESCAPE POD AND WILL BE DESTROYED!”

“I’m not a traitor!” Number 994 yelled.

“They can’t hear you,” the elf snapped, keeping a close eye on the orc while he tried to steer the vehicle away from the chasing defense force. “Dang it! The thing’s broken!”

“I can fix it,” Number 994 said. “I’ll get us away from here.” Number 994 inwardly grinned. This elf was going to die.

“Why would you suddenly help me!” the elf said, frantically spinning the wheel as it quickly descended. Another explosion was heard in the back of the escape pod.

“You heard them—they think I’m a rebel and my life is forfeit with them,” Number 994 said. “Figure might as well try to live.”

The elf gazed at him suspiciously. Number 994 moved forward. “We’re going to crashland,” he said, and grabbed his gloves. The elf didn’t resist, but merely pointed his gun at him as Number 994 placed his gloved hands on the controls. Sending electric probes through the metal, he moved his hands to create link points to the controls and sent a surge of electric current to it, instantly connecting mind and motherboard. Removing one hand, with the other he readjusted and reflowed electricity around the broken points to his hand to steer. He mentally thought and the airescape pod shifted to the right, narrowly avoiding being blown up. Number 994 was in charge of the escape pod. And then, without looking at the elf, he briefly stopped controlling the escape pod to send a thundering bolt of lightning at this rebellious elf. He missed with the bolt, but a sidecurrent of lightning still caught him.

The elf gave a cry as he was flung back against the cabin. Number 994 quickly looked back. The elf’s head was bleeding and his gun was worthless at this point. Regaining control of the escape pod, while keeping an eye on the elf, he steered more to the right and worked to avoid the gun bullets while slowly trying to mentally turn on the loudspeakers. Finally, he found their electronic point and turned them on.

“THIS IS NUMBER 994!” he cried out. A huge gust of wind suddenly hit him from behind, but Number 994 thought nothing of it. “I HAVE REGAINED CONTROL OF THE ESCAPE POD FROM THE REBEL! I AM NOT ASSISTING THE REBEL. I NOW SEEK TO RETURN THE TRAITOR TO THE MOTHERESCAPE POD!”

“I’M KIDDING!” the elf roared. Number 994 swore heavily and turned around to see the elf, having grabbed the two emergency jet packs, wearing one, and having the other in his hand. He was standing near the wide-open escape hatch, and Number 994 could see the Motherescape pod defense force pouring down upon them. Blood trickled down the elf’s head. The elf grinned and the Number 994’s heart seemed to freeze, as he realized that he should have been paying more attention to the torrent of air that had been hitting him.

“Good bye!” the elf said, and, dropping the extra jet pack, flung himself out of the back, quickly descending from sight. Too late, Number 994 saw a barrage coming toward the underside of the escape pod. With a huge explosion, Number 994 felt an elephant thunder through his mind as all of the electronics he was connected to were violently disconnected and broken. It was as if someone had ripped his mind in two.

Number 994 was flung back against the glass windshield of the escape pod as it plummeted, no longer able to be in control. Number 994 slammed back against the wall and looked up just in time to see another barrage coming toward him. And then the escape pod hit something in the front of it. The glass shattered, and Number 994 fell, seeing a tree above him and the escape pod. The escape pod exploded in a ball of fire. And then Number 994 hit the ground.

Question of the Week:What do you think about Number 994?